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Amidst the Rubble
Contributed by
regent
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Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 06:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Do you blame the face of your savior,
When the skies are burning down
where was he when you called him
Weeping over the worlds sin
Let love and lust be seductive
Let greed and hate be destructive
Allow the world to fall to failure
without a cure
For there is no cure for the wicked
No chance for the departed
Little hope for the stranded
as their pain is not remanded
Can you find a path to redemption
amidst the rubble
Can you see a way to light
When there is no dawn
For it has been long since the earth
has worn the fingerprints of God
Could it be the savior we wish after
was consumed by idle laughter
Do you blame the face of your savior,
When the skies are burning down
Maybe he threw down his crowne
because it was you that lit the fire
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regent
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2010-03-17 18:00:22]
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Re: Amidst the Rubble
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by thistle_and_fern on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 07:51:09 PM AEST
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Very true words in this verse. Especially like " Can you see a way yo light when there is no dawn".
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Re: Amidst the Rubble
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by Ken57426 on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 08:22:07 PM AEST
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.... Stunning (this is where i start my slow build up clap)... You really got my emotions going throughout the entire thing and ended it in just the right way to wrap those emotions up correctly.
cant wait to read me! |
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