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untitled
Contributed by
Anonymous13
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Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 09:05:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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when we are where we are,
we want to be where they are.
we want to see what they see,
when they see it,
i want to walk with her
where she is.
i want to walk the same steps she is,
at the same moment.
i want to be the first thing her smile hits
when it becomes.
i want my ear to be the first to hear her laugh
when the softness of it bears in my mind
i want my reflection in her eyes at the same time
her thought is in my head
i hear her voice in my head above all other things
i see her eyes everytime i blink
i hold these thoughts above the agony.
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2010-03-17 21:05:21]
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Re: untitled
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by DrcGaimer on
Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 09:22:35 AM AEST
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| Very good anonymous 13. Keep writing. Don't allow this to be your last. |
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Re: untitled
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by spud on
Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 12:28:01 PM AEST
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Hi,
I can feel a deep sadness behind your words,
and I admire how you strung out all the wants,
wheres, whens, and we's, into meaningful
phrases.
Tommy
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