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Silent Crowd
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 09:22:45 PM in AEST
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Silent Crowd
A mothers voice,
A childs laugh,
A dogs bark,
A cats purr,
Sounds surround me,
As I stand in this crowd,
All awhile Im screaming,
No one seems to hear me.
A mothers scream,
A childs silence,
A dogs growl,
A cats hiss,
The crowd disperses franticly,
Something is amiss,
Finally, they notice,
The laugh is a fake,
Though the silence is real.
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2010-03-17 21:22:45]
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Re: Silent Crowd
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by spud on
Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 12:18:09 PM AEST
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Hi,
To be in the midst of sights and sounds and yet
to feel only ...... isolation. The worst kind of
lonliness.
I like its style.
Tommy
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Re: Silent Crowd
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by Auston on
Saturday, 20th March 2010 @ 09:27:08 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written. So concise, yet so open-ended. Much enjoyed.
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