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In the Mind of Sutter Cane
Contributed by
Harimitsu
on
Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 06:30:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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There is a man
With pen in hand
Who thought you to exist
Now it's time to face
Your proper place
And do as he would wish
And if you see things
Not human being
And you think you've gone insane
These were brought
By a single thought
From a man named Sutter Cane
While blood cascades
And the fires blaze
You can see his darker side
Yet no matter where you run
He'll have his fun
There is no place to hide
For the world you see
So vividly
Was made inside his brain
And it began
With a single strand
Of words from Sutter Cane
Now don't speak ill
Of this writers' skill
Or you may not live to regret
For I know well
The things in hell
You'll never soon forget
Like hideous creatures
With such grotesque features
Their saliva drips like rain
With teeth sharp as knives
They've all been contrived
In the thoughts of Sutter Cane
So with the pills you take
You still sleep awake
And you can't ignore his spell
For every thought
He has begot
Is all apart of Hell
There is no mend,
There is no end
To the constant utter pain
Once you see
The cruelty
In the mind of Sutter Cane
Copyright ©
Harimitsu
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2010-03-18 18:30:56]
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Re: In the Mind of Sutter Cane
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 18th March 2010 @ 11:24:51 PM AEST
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| Alot of very creative imagination gone into this,and toying with the reader's feelings to create a real sense of foreboding.... so with the pills you take you still sleep awake, chilling |
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