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Give All
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Saturday, 20th March 2010 @ 08:27:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Life, could give me an ocean, filled with wealth
Give me Gold in a Treasure Chest,send me
to places, never seen ,Give me a Mansion in
a garden of bliss,with flowers that gave me
petals of jewels, Rain that shower me with
gifts,wrapped in Bows and Ribbons, of
golden silk, Forest of trees, with leaves
of money, Sky filled with diamonds that
fall as rain, and lay there mine to keep
All i would gladly refuse,for the time
When love, we shared, once mine
Key to your Heart,again i could see
Turn, forever, then locked, with me
Copyright ©
Fuzzy
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2010-03-20 08:27:11]
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Re: Give All
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 20th March 2010 @ 01:31:45 PM AEST
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| I so wish I had the glue that would mend a broken heart, take care Anna |
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Re: Give All
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th March 2010 @ 05:00:24 PM AEST
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oh.my.goodness. Fuzzy, this is just brilliantly breathtaking. How lovely the thought and how provocatively captivating the write. That last stanza invokes sighs of the deeply romantic kind. So fortunate for me to sign in this evening and find this. :) Just beautiful.
Seléne ~
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Re: Give All
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 09:04:01 AM AEST
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A write that boasts of vivid imagery and care I really enjoyed this. Such a softness to your words that touch the reader. Well written.
take care
duff |
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Re: Give All
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 03:05:06 PM AEST
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wow... overwhelming with immeasurable depth!!
just powerful and poignant to say the least
take care
-K.Z. |
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