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Satins Calling
Contributed by
Prophet
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Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 10:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In this place you will find
A better place for all man kind
Just take a step outside the door
and see what youve been waiting for
they say this place is out of reach
but all you need is to believe
just take the knife and cease to breathe
and let your soul come out to leave
freedom is made by guns and knifes
sacrifice is the only way to survive
youll find that this is all you need
its the only place where youll be free
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Prophet
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2010-03-21 22:32:41]
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Re: Satins Calling
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by purplestary on
Monday, 22nd March 2010 @ 11:52:08 PM AEST
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| wow. i can't beleive i'm the first person to comment on this write. this was amazing. really touches on that "it's the only way out" subject..and yet lets you know that it is satan calling by giving it that title..it's true, and inspirational a little...it's telling me it's the only way, and yet telling me that it isn't true..telling me not to give up..it's the realization that you may want to die, but somewhere hidden in it all is the desire to survive...when i feel this way i always end up thinking to myself.."what if i give up, and tomorrow was my time, my day, and my dreams come true..what if i do this and I end up missing it...it being my time to have peace, comfort, and serenity..if i give up then i won't know what happens tomorrow..maybe tomorrow is my day.." |
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