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Breath of Life
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2010 @ 09:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Breath of Life
I remember the nights not so long in the past When I would fall asleep wondering how long this could last Wishing for things to change no matter what the cost Almost praying for death before morning, feeling so lost
Trapped in a world that with no one I could share Surely I would be called crazy, so I do not even dare What have I done to deserve being punished this way? How many days of Hell must I endure until my debt is paid?
One day as I went through what had become a normal routine There appeared a name that appeared new to the scene Slightly apprehensive and timid at first A friendship soon from the budding did burst
Time spent exchanging thoughts, ideas and such The connection grew but neither knew how much One day in a discussion the feelings were conveyed That into giving up completely each was kept from being swayed
Each agreed the other had breathed new life into them New roots from this relationship continually did stem Firm and strong, beautiful and flourishing May this breath of life be forever nourishing
Deadwriter 03/22/2010
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Re: Breath of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by JakerBaker88 on
Wednesday, 24th March 2010 @ 08:11:08 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful and sweet, I really thought this was quite good. It conveyed longing, hope, and, lastly love realized. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us. Take care.
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