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Where are you?
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2010 @ 01:49:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Where have you gone
Where did you go
No emails sent
I just dont know.
I called your place
I rung your phone
your mobiles off
Theres no one home.
I guess you found
A place to go
With someone who
would love you so.
Just wish you said
Before you left
without a trace
Someone youd met.
Would it have been
So hard to say
Goodbye my friend
Im on my way.
The silence is
A dreadful sound
Not knowing why
Youre not around.
The questions lay
unanswered still
I question it
and always will.
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Re: Where are you?
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 24th March 2010 @ 04:57:10 AM AEST
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| Looking for closure......I question it and always will.... a very personal and heartfelt write about the sadness and frustration not having closure brings, I empathise with these feelings as I know many will who have found themselves in this situation. well written |
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Re: Where are you?
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by canyouhearme on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 05:34:36 AM AEST
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I understand this feeling all too well.
It's a wonder how anyone can just vanish. |
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Re: Where are you?
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 03:35:04 PM AEST
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Modern life gives us so many ways of communicating with people that we often forget that we actually should communicate in the first place !!.
I think sometimes life gets in the way of actually living too, I've always said that.
Still, you are right.........we need to let those dear to us know what is happening with us.
Steve |
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