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My Next Refrain
Contributed by
ThirtyDays
on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I never thought it would end
Let alone this way,
You said all the right things
A woman could say
I gave what little I had
And what I had not,
I didn't want too much
Or so I had thought
And then the day came when
You pushed in the knife,
It seemed more of a pleasure
You squeezing out my life
You ignored all of my pleas
You knew I was falling,
It seemed you heard just grief
When my sorrow was calling
You may have been quite scared
It seemed a fast pace,
But I was in no hurry
Love is not a race
Maybe you had gotten lost
Wondering what to do,
But keeping it a secret
Hurt me and guarded you
A friend had pulled me out
Of the crash one day,
Helped me to see colour
When all I saw was grey
It's been a lot of months now
Of getting back on track,
I've stood up, forced a smile
Gave you the knife back
And so the story closes
I won't see you again,
I'm be here just waiting
Till my next refrain
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ThirtyDays
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2003-04-12 17:25:00]
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Re: My Next Refrain
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by full_blur on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:39:16 PM AEST
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| The meter of your poem is outstanding. Godd structuring and flow. Great job. |
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Re: My Next Refrain
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 06:27:45 PM AEST
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