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take me
Contributed by
boo-boo
on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 12:57:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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slit your wist
so deep into the skin
the blood is misting
there is a pool of blood
i feel like ****
so many people try to help me
why am i still alive
god please take me
devil please take me
i try so hard at things here
this place will never be a home
i want to run really far
there is a big whole inside me
mom please take me home
dad please take me home
it hurts so much being here
i try so hard every were
dad please do not hit me any more
stop drinking it hurts us all
i cry every night waighting for you to come
ten years went by and i am still in foster care
i am such a big mistake child
i slit my wrist
what is next my throat
then i will be bead
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Re: take me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th March 2010 @ 04:44:11 PM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
Hope this is just good writing but if it's true I'd say you need a friend. If you need someone to listen you can pm me any time. I'm usually here.
huggs, prayer, blessings,
emy |
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Re: take me
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 03:04:33 AM AEST
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So sad,and so full of pain, i do hope
this is only in the write, if True then
i hope you find strength.
well written.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: take me
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 11:08:05 AM AEST
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this is so upsetting,
no child esp. at a very young age
should ever feel this way
just hang in there...
reach out to those who can help
take care
-K.Z. |
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