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Storm
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 03:10:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Your suffering
is just self-pity
disguised
Your agony
is just what you want
to see with your eyes
So see me now
as the diversion
we always hoped we could be
and waste this moment
in each other's arms
before we fully realize
the folly in
each other's lies
to ourselves
Confused with doubt
Straight as an arrow
with clout
Ready to stand strong
regardless of the Storm
We are brewing
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2010-03-30 03:10:17]
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Re: Storm
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 03:17:56 AM AEST
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| What a powerful write challenging underlying motives and building a relationship on lies, great imagery to embellish this. |
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