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Enabler
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 06:45:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I cheated it out of you
I bought you back
With paper smiles
You dont need fire to burn
Same old thing
You always fall for,
Youre the one crawling back
On the knees I let you have
Stripped of your instinct
You feel what I tell you
You wilt better than flowers
You bow lower than kings
Ill charm you with my jagged tooth grin
As I bite down on your dignity
I can erase you from existence
Just by calling you what you are
It will swallow you up
In a shame hole
As I call you
Enabler
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2010-03-30 18:45:05]
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Re: Enabler
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 08:43:01 AM AEST
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Oh wow. I have no words. This was exceptional. You blend your descriptions so damn well in this. And even though I can't articulate exactly why this moved me, know truly, that I am extremely impressed. Sensational write!!
Seléne ~
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Re: Enabler
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 11:45:31 AM AEST
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A write layered with menace and darkness this is quite gripping. The imagery paints haunting pictures that flash with mystery. This was great. Well written
take care
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Re: Enabler
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by veronicablue on
Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 09:29:40 AM AEST
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| so powerful, i had to still my breath reading this.. |
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