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The Final Moment.
Contributed by
canyouhearme
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Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 06:57:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sometimes the memories
Of the day you left this earth
haunt me in my slumber,
Thats always where they lurk.
With a broken heart, I remember
Every moment, to your last.
I tired my best to hold on close,
Every minute, until you passed.
Mom asked us, how involved,
Each of us wanted to be.
I said right by grandmas side,
Until the end, is where Ill be.
I watched your chest rise and fall,
Each, with a shorter stretch of time.
I looked up with great concern.
Our faces seemed to mime.
Please forgive me for my tears,
As I struggled to be strong.
But in the moments of your last breath,
Everything felt so hard and wrong.
We all stood in silence,
As with grace, you slipped away.
I mustered up composure,
As I tried to figure out what to say.
My mom, she did not shed a tear,
As she knew you were no longer in pain.
My uncles got on their phones,
To tell friends of the angel Gods would gain.
I stayed close to grandma,
Staring out the window, into the night.
Thats when I saw a figure,
Fly past me, into the night.
Grandpa came to get her.
That, I know for sure.
Grandma waited 11 years to rejoin him,
Grandpas love was the only cure.
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Re: The Final Moment.
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by thistle_and_fern on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 12:25:27 AM AEST
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Wow, made me cry. I know the feelings you expressed and you expressed them so well.
It is not easy losingthose we love but they are with the ones they loved who went before.
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Re: The Final Moment.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 08:37:25 AM AEST
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I have no words to describe the beauty and elegance with which you paid tribute to your grandmother's last moments. There is a sadness that is comforted in every line. Truly exquisite. That last stanza really choked me up. So gorgeously written. Well done!
Seléne ~
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