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lost, life, gain, repeat
Contributed by
eshine
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Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 08:45:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Lost
I cannot seem to point
The way which used to lead,
My precious life, was all a lie
Shattered lives we are all under its knife
Who thinks otherwise
Is under the oblivion
Of the dark spell
Life
Is that what you call living?
We all suffer in vain, we smile sometime
We search for happiness
We find some rapped in the illusion
Of time we never had
As time is a mere second
In your head to be otherwise
Gain
Copyright ©
eshine
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2010-04-01 20:45:42]
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Re: lost, life, gain, repeat
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 11:17:41 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed how you made the poem transition from each stage and your words leave images filling out the topics wonderfully. This was something different to read and thank you for sharing.
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