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Last words
Contributed by
preludepuffman
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Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 09:50:30 PM in AEST
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Sitting alone in the abandoned room
Waiting for his impending doom
Recalling his life in his senseless mind
Caught in this unsurpassable bind
Waiting for death to take his life away
He has thought about this each and every passing day
He failed at life but maybe he will succeed in death
He has nothing left to live for so the bullet took his last breath
This is the mentality of the man that gave up on life
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2010-04-01 21:50:30]
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Re: Last words
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 10:17:06 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Sad but good writing.
It's nice to know this is inthe past.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Last words
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by steffygoesrawr13 on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 06:10:45 PM AEST
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| I love your use of words. very deep. take a look at the poem i have poseted and tell me wat u think |
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