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Sitting Here Waiting On A Deer
Contributed by
kinderbow
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Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 10:23:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Sitting here on this cold winter day,
Waiting on a deer,
I saw them only yesterday,
Where are they? They sure aren't here.
My nose is running, my feet are cold,
My hands I think are gone,
The "Big One" is here I'm told,
So I sit here since dawn.
The wind is blowing, I can't hear a thing,
So movement is hard to spot,
It would truly make my heart sing,
For a chance to get a shot.
I'll wait here with hopes high,
This is bound to be the year,
When at last my opportunity will walk by,
I'll be bringing home a deer.
So whether sun, wind, snow or rain,
I'll wait here patiently,
Even if this is not my day,
I'll be dreaming of bringing home a trophy.
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kinderbow
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2010-04-01 22:23:42]
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Re: Sitting Here Waiting On A Deer
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by Inchiostro on
Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 06:12:29 AM AEST
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I like the break from normal topics, and the writing style is really good. Thanks for sharing keep it up.
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