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Loves Dance
Contributed by
Recyclebin
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Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 10:22:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The scent of obsession softly floats in the ambient air
The night, its just about you, the center of my stare.
Burning sensations, in sync, we move as one
To the sound beats loves stepping stone.
One step at a time, dance with me
Come come baby follow me..
Forget about the politics,
Glide with your heart n soul in rhythmic acoustics.
Baby dont think, just dance, dance
Dance with me tonight
Beads sparkle in aurora prism of disco lights,
I want to end this night with you
You and me, lets follow this love song
Its the raging river flowing out of view.
A story book romance made strong.
Created by you and me under the moon
Tonight this song may wind to the end,
For us, the harmonics of love play a tune
On Forever and ever like the distant stars spend.
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2010-04-03 22:22:53]
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Re: Loves Dance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 09:09:31 AM AEST
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Bin, this is so softly romantic and beautiful. It's almost floating, the way it reads. Almost like the dance itself, this piece swirls and lightly breezes over the tongue with every line. Wonderfully done.
Seléne ~
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Re: Loves Dance
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by thistle_and_fern on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 03:58:22 PM AEST
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Well written, bought back such sweet memories of love and the dance of love.
Agree, it swirls around you, embracing you in the words, transcending you to another time and place.
May we all find a dance of love like this.
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Re: Loves Dance
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by canyouhearme on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 06:29:50 PM AEST
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This rolls so nicely off the tongue, and makes love seem easy and light.
Fantastic! |
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