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feeding imperfections
Contributed by
eshine
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Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 11:24:20 PM in AEST
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oops
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Practicing my imperfections
Falseness what I crave,
Lying, dirt, sin
This is what drives me,
What keeps me awake,
People crave fakeness
Opposite of what is,
Expectations, false beliefs
You have to have the attitude
To fit in!
no,
Never played by the rules
Never conform to needs,
Some will drown you,
Will sniff the living out of you,
And you stand naked
To bleed,
Only to remain
The one you always been,
Showing whats not
Bringing what is,
Never will I loose myself
To others needs
Accept more
Care less!
Let me fall again
To flow with life again and again,
Leave it as it stands
Perfectly coordinated,
Copyright ©
eshine
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2010-04-03 23:24:20]
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Re: feeding imperfections
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 09:15:51 AM AEST
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This is great. There is rebellion on the rise in your words and it carries a swagger that makes me smile. Like a cool strut this just flows throughout and I enjoyed reading every word. The idea of conforming to please disturbs me and this write throws a wicked curve ball to the heart of that idea. Great write
take care
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