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Lying through your teeth doesn't count as flossing.
Contributed by
karinagutierrez121
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Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 06:02:46 PM in AEST
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Whoever said life was worth living,
had to of been kidding.
Cuz tonight, i'm feeling so much pain.
Someone, please, teach me how to whisper cuz I feel
like screaming. I'm gonna take back all i've said to you,
just like you did to me. No regrets this time, maybe i'll finally learn
to breathe. First, you tell me you miss me, then, you just
ditch me. It makes me wonder, if I really mean anything to you.
I don't know why it's so hard for me to walk away.
Maybe it's cuz you still have my heart in those hands of yours.
I'm not asking for much, you're happy and in love, so, why not give it back?
I bet the only reason you're still around is cuz whenever your lover leaves for a bit,
and you're feeling so alone, you can pick up the phone and call me, cuz you know,
i'd never do anything to hurt you. Afterward, you make me believe i'm actually worth something.
But darling, honestly, lying through your teeth doesn't count as flossing.
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Re: Lying through your teeth doesn't count as flossing.
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 06:45:44 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Your title is defiantly an attention getter and that's a good thing.
Awesome writing.
This write is self explanatory and it really does live up to it's title
Very creative.
huggs, blessings,
emy. |
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Re: Lying through your teeth doesn't count as flossing.
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by lothas on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 10:13:39 PM AEST
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I like the title also i felt like this a few times
wonder use of feelings getting it all out hope you write a pt 2
great job |
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Re: Lying through your teeth doesn't count as flossing.
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by ExoM on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 06:25:04 PM AEST
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The title is amazing!
But im not really sure how flossing relates back to the poem? Please help me understand? |
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