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Mother's Kitchen
Contributed by
Brownm28
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 07:25:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Graceful palm movements guided
the spoon in a merry-go-round
fashion, demolishing the potatoes.
A high-pitched menacing tone vibrated
ear drums of those nearby. Mother
instinctively opened the oven door
greeting the cooked green broccoli
whose fate was sealed for digestion.
Aunt Lois journeyed into the kitchen
carefully cradling a plate full of meat
resembling a cautious hearse driver
transporting a breathless being.
The voyage for steak seasoning
pulled away from port with mother
as captain, a kitchen map tattooed
opposite her soft palm, guiding the
expedition to any treasure that desired
to be discovered amongst the pots and pans.
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Brownm28
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2010-04-06 19:25:40]
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Re: Mother's Kitchen
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 07:55:39 AM AEST
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Hi,
If I was marking it, you would be top of the class!
This is so full of a maturity that defies your age
(and I'm guessing, mid to late teens?) and not
short on humour also.
Well scripted, scribe!
Tommy
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