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Walls
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 12:13:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Foul this feeling of disgust;
The soul dripping with contempt,
For the careless whispers of the heart.
Sordid this unfortunate turn of events;
The body empty without loving,
But comfortable alone------
Walls having been constructed,
For the likes of him to remain outside
Unable to cross my threshold again.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-04-08 12:13:13]
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Re: Walls
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 03:06:17 PM AEST
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Full to the brim of its short life with rage, I felt it as I read.
For me personally, something quite dark and menacing about it too.
I guess a poem is whatever it is to the one who read it, as long as they take something from it :-)
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Re: Walls
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by Jessi95 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 07:36:43 PM AEST
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| Wow....that was....so full of feeling...Im not even sure why, But i feel like crying |
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Re: Walls
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by Jessi95 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 07:37:01 PM AEST
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| Wow....that was....so full of feeling...Im not even sure why, But i feel like crying |
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