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That very important person in life
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 03:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i have had many burdens
some more uncontrollable than others
and others that can't be helped by life itself
when you are a person
with no choice but to go on with life
dont you ever wish that
you can change your past
to make your present better and brighter
who do you alway turn to
whenever life is being mean to you
or whenever you see yourself as a failure
and someone or something tells you that
you're just having problems
and tell you that you need help
and when you ask them any question
they give you a true, honest answer
to help you with your problems in life
if you ask for help, they are always there
with, for, and by you for any reasons
no matter how big or small it is
well whoever that person is
let them know that they matter to you
and do whatever it takes to make them
believe in you and themselves as well as you do to them
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PreciousKitten
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2010-04-08 15:36:42]
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Re: That very important person in life
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 08:00:20 PM AEST
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Nice piece with a great message at the end. I enjoyed this poem. A good friend is hard to come by these days. I hope you have someone like this because I can tell you are the person who always helps everyone with their problems. It's cool what you can tell about someone in their writing. Again great poem.
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