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opiate gladness
Contributed by
scooterhyme
on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 05:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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a warm wind blows
a vacuum rattling the window blinds
a solitary television and lounge chairs
are my Zion
a cold cold world
as sunlight dances on the carpet
like beauties last cruel farewell
a wonderful smile
on torturous aimlessness
my legs are cold
i try to pull them to my chest
but they are already there
i do these things so many times
but they vanish from my mind
intangible ghosts
purgatory and escaping air
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scooterhyme
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2010-04-08 17:56:16]
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Re: opiate gladness
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 07:16:56 PM AEST
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This has a very hallucinogenic tone to it that calms the mind while letting it wander into different realms and untouched pastures. Intriguing piece of work you have written and one for the mind to walk through new doors. Great write.
take care
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