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Sever My Evidence
Contributed by
regent
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Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 06:05:55 PM in AEST
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Hard times hail no breath of reverence
for a bleeding heart, a kind hand
as men begin to sever evidence
No hopes elate with providence
lonely men with shotguns watch their land
as hard times hail no breath for reverence
When did we begin to dance
Following your lead, every demand
as men begin to sever evidence
Drawers full of condiments
covering up the contraband
as hard times hail no breath of reverence
How does god feel to see his sentiments
rise and fall on men with cancer
as men begin to sever evidence
How does it feel to see your last defense
rise and fall as a planned repremand
Hard times hail no breath of reverence
as men begin to sever evidence.
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Re: Sever My Evidence
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 11:09:28 PM AEST
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| very strong write full of anger and contempt,opening line is great....Hard times hail no breath of reverence for a bleeding heart,you paint a picture of hopelessness and a world beyond repair, well written |
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Re: Sever My Evidence
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by Cayleigh-Chan on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 05:44:18 AM AEST
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Sad write, but oh so true.
Favorite line:
How does god feel to see his sentiments
rise and fall on men with cancer
This one just really stuck out to me.
Great angry poem. |
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