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Memories
Contributed by
steffygoesrawr13
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Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 04:40:03 PM in AEST
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Its hard to think back to the times I spent with you
Its hard to believe the things you said were true
Its different, now I wake, without the twinkle in my eye
Its different, because I know you werent just some guy
It hurts to live on every moment in despair
It hurts to face the fact that youre no longer there
Its better for me to pretend that Im okay
Its better for me to lie, the love slowly fades away
I hate it how I wonder, did it have to be this way
I hate it how I feel like Im caught, what a clich
Each night I lay awake, thinking of your voice
The darkness in my heart leaves me with no other choice
I dont know what to do to stop these feelings, you dont care
I dont know how much longer this emptiness I can bare
What do I do now as you throw me to the side
What do I do now just a ripple in the tide
How much longer will it take for my aching heart to mend
How much longer will I feel like I just lost my only friend
I try not to think of all the times you made me laugh
I try not to think that you held my other half
I can honestly say, all we had I cant regret
I can honestly say you, I will never ever forget
I hate to say its true
I hate to say Im blue
Ill never come to tell you
That, Chad I truly miss you
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Re: Memories
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by aliopterix on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 01:06:38 AM AEST
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| Deep expression from someone at a young age. You denonstrate all your emotions and it flows nicely. Well done, |
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Re: Memories
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 06:25:36 AM AEST
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A tender outpouring from a girl growing up, into a world where affairs of the heart begin to develop,
thus thrusting upon her the journey of life, love and the loss it can inevitably bring.....
A very personal and pivotal piece from your jigsaw of life''s love experience x
Star x x x |
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Re: Memories
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by venkat on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 07:01:50 AM AEST
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I checked out your three poems.
Tender emotions, harsh realities and thoughtful words flowing in your poetry.
May you shine more and more like the waxing moon:-) venkat
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Re: Memories
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by Keykey on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 09:11:41 PM AEST
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| I don't find this poem amateur at all. In a matter of fact, I felt the same way with my first love. You're a very good poet and I hope you continue. |
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