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Tears from my own eyes
Contributed by
lothas
on
Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 04:57:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The hurt from my own eyes
Pain and death everywhere
Tears many a tear have fallen
Many a laughter dies
Many a hope lost
So you cant leave and die
There are still people on this earth that love you
Rise up and live a long life
Hear the angles sing for you
Hear my heart beat
Restore hope
Restore love
Restore life
Come back again and live anew
Hope isnt lost
Life goes on and on
So why cant yours now?!
Stop the tears from falling
Stop the life from draining away
What every happened to the fun times
Now those days are gone
Now those times are lost
Now those things we did are all thats remain
Now those things we said still remain in my head
I am sad, never to see your face again
Now I cant say the things I wanted to say to you
Now I cant talk to you like the old days
Now I cant hear your voice through the madness
Now I cant see your face and remember
I miss you
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Re: Tears from my own eyes
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by tswilkins on
Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 06:48:48 PM AEST
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| I remember experiencing these emotions when my grandmother and my great grandmother died. I have learned to use the good qualities they had in my own life, and so in that way, I keep them with me. I am sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing your emotions. |
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Re: Tears from my own eyes
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by Jessi95 on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 06:33:37 PM AEST
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| This is REALLY good, i love it, I felt all of this when my dad died....It is a painful life to live |
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Re: Tears from my own eyes
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 03:05:12 PM AEST
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| Wow really loved the way you used the words the write came out just right keep writing. |
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Re: Tears from my own eyes
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 04:14:55 AM AEST
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| Wow nice really really nice love the write alot keep using that gift you have I know you will. |
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