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All That I Am
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 02:27:33 PM in AEST
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~ x ~
The very moment our eyes meet
My soul quivers with anticipation
The longing for two to become one
Overpowering mind and body
The very reason for which we exist
Hold me, Take me, Love me.....
For everything I have is yours
~x~
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Re: All That I Am
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 02:37:08 PM AEST
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| Now if that isnt love speaking I don't know what is xxx |
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Re: All That I Am
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by SlipyNarcis2112 on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 04:06:54 PM AEST
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| While the ending feels a bit exasperated in regard of it's poetic usage, the rest is much more genuine. Good read. |
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Re: All That I Am
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 04:12:04 PM AEST
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Omigosh, hun. That last line. ::siiiiigh:: What a declaration of heart and soul that says a thousand things if it says one. That, my dear friend is the epitome of devotion. When one is ready to surrender everything, that is indeed an indication of the selflessness of love. Beautifully worded sweetie. A lovely lovely write.
Seléne ~
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Re: All That I Am
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2010 @ 12:33:45 AM AEST
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| Perfectly beautiful; beautifully perfect. |
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Re: All That I Am
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by spud on
Monday, 12th April 2010 @ 01:12:16 PM AEST
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Hi L,
There's nothing more you can give after you give
everything. Hope the recipient appreciates this
declaration.
Well said.
Tommy
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Re: All That I Am
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 06:12:33 AM AEST
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Surrendering...........how trusting, how brave, and even dangerous too!
I'm so glad you have all that for your precious one, and so special for you too!
Very touching indeed!
Warm love
consue
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