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Petrol Station
Contributed by
b3nnehboi
on
Monday, 12th April 2010 @ 05:34:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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On Red
I am a Puppet.
Tickle my nose
Right hand side
Pull the trigger
She sits
Passenger side
Shes off my mind
Wedding ring?
Petals pressed
Roses are red-
You know the rest
Hand outstretched
Windscreen Mess
Hands on your head
Pulled the trigger.
Copyright ©
b3nnehboi
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2010-04-12 17:34:12]
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Re: Petrol Station
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 06:06:18 AM AEST
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This is wonderful, you capture the feeling so well.
I like your style, keep writing.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: Petrol Station
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by qwaseder on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 03:11:14 AM AEST
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Niiiiiccceee......
got a talent man |
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