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Inamorata
Contributed by
SlipyNarcis2112
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 08:11:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My dear inamorata
Your soulful salient bliss
My dear inamorata
From my desire's abyss
From sea to sea
From lands afar
From day to night
From star to star
Oh how I wonder where you are
My dear inamorata
Oh how I wonder where you are
From face to face
From wound and scar
From place to place
From man to czar
Oh how I wonder who you are
My dear inamorata
Oh how I wonder who you are
My lost inamorata
If you are there please know this
My lost inamorata
I crave you
Your body
Your soul
Your kiss
Copyright ©
SlipyNarcis2112
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2010-04-13 20:11:20]
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Re: Inamorata
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by JakerBaker88 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 12:53:24 AM AEST
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| I've read a few of your poems and thought you should know that I found each one flawless. You are extremely talented. This poem, as with the others, illustraits that. As for this poem, it was beautifully written, well conceived, and flowed masterfully. It also had a clear longing, yet hopeful message that most of us can relate to. Great work once again! Thanks for sharing. =) |
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Re: Inamorata
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by Spike on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 03:25:12 AM AEST
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Impressive. playful, well rhymed, good metre, immortal subject.
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