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The Bridge
Contributed by
ivybabe
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Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 11:30:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The water below her reflecting the moonlight was like and old friend warm and inviting. As she moved closer to the edge she heard him cry in the darkness begging her not to. She turned with a smile and her face tears streaming down her face and said "Is this not what you wanted? He whispered " I'm sorry". To which she replied " Pain was my first name,Suffering my second and, Death shall be my last. She stepped back with a smile and said good-bye.
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Re: The Bridge
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by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 11:40:58 PM AEST
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| Very strong emotions written here. Very good. |
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Re: The Bridge
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 15th April 2010 @ 03:13:08 AM AEST
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| A really good piece of writing clever in the way you have composed it |
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