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Used
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 08:00:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A rotten formaldehyde
In the state of Denmark
Joined empires
Just to preserve our map
A swim across to Switzerland
A von Trapp tramping in the Alps
To a freedom where
We bear each others unbending chains
War infection, a rash of loss
A plague of fear follows
While carrying buddy on my back,
Even though I know hes dead,
For guilt, for shame,
And a little for self-protection
(Start again, it reeks)
Love my salty preservative
Sickens with self-made gangrene
For using before giving
Spoils every time.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
... [
2010-04-17 08:00:34]
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Re: Used
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by aliopterix on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 03:35:12 AM AEST
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| If this was a painting it would be an excellent example of surrealism. Your metaphors are subtle and clever and makes for an enjoyable read. Thank you friend.Aliopterix. |
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