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one minute
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
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it took a minute to understand myself
of why i feel so old sometimes
and why i put myself through hell
i question and answer but never
learn anything new
i listen
i steal
i cheat
im worthless
is this why no one loves me?
could i be too analytical
could i force myself to feel too much?
i forgot in what direction this was supposed to go in
there are about 20 seconds left to feel
but i need to truly feel
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9
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im out of ideas
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2
1
worthless.
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fallensilence
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2003-04-13 11:35:00]
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Re: one minute
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:50:27 PM AEST
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| oh...i know exactly what you mean... |
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Re: one minute
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 09:07:20 PM AEST
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no your not worthless. If you stop feeling you stop living. This is a great poem with wonderful expression.
Michelle |
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Re: one minute
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by tease_whizz on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:08:03 AM AEST
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| this one flows like the thought process, really interesting style. no one with your talent is worthless. Kate x |
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