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Goodbye
Contributed by
Jessi95
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Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 07:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Every night I lay
And cry myself to sleep
Because thinking of you
Makes my heart want to weep
I used to think
I was mad at you
But the beauty of day
Made it clear it wasnt true
Why do I feel so empty,
Now that you are gone?
And why can no one else
Hear your angels song?
It seemed that God was mad at me
For not wanting you to die
When all that I wanted in the entire world
Was a chance to say goodbye
Ive said goodbye so many times before
That it just didnt seem fair
That the one time that it really mattered
I wasnt allowed to be there
I guess that in theory
The pain should be gone
But we live in the real world
Where it just keeps going on
My love will last
Till the very end
When all that is lost
Will find its way again
Copyright ©
Jessi95
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2010-04-18 19:31:41]
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Re: Goodbye
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 09:16:14 PM AEST
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| Saying goodbye is so important and yet life doesnt always give us that opportunity leaving us with alot of unresolved feelings,you have expressed all of this well in this very heartfelt write |
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Re: Goodbye
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by aliopterix on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 10:09:00 PM AEST
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| In a slightly different sense I did not have the opportunity to say goodbye to my father before he died but the point is the same. Atruly emotional read. Well done. Aliopterix. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by tjmontanagirl on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 01:50:24 PM AEST
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I cant even tell you how connected to this poem i feel, I recently lost my father and in a sense I fell that I felt the same way you do now. This almost brought me to tears because goodbye was so important and I didnt get to say it :(
this was extremely beautiful and so truthful, please keep writing!!!!!
~Taylor |
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