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Pure Love
Contributed by
duff
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Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 08:21:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Under the moonlight they dance
summers night dressed in rain
their smiles spin ecstasy wild
gazing into mirrored green
these eyes forget public's care
laughter loud bursts open
blanketing lifes quiet cool
love soaring into the streets
crashing puddles with hearts lead
pure emotion sidestepping strange minds
this moment captures life in bloom
live to love or hide to hate
this love shatters shields exposing the inside
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Re: Pure Love
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by Breezy on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 08:34:24 PM AEST
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This is stunning. Absolutely stunning. There is a
playfulness in this, but it also possesses a delicate
affinity that is so damn gorgeous. I adore the last
line, but this is all just wonderfully written. Beauty
wrapped in poetry.
A delightful piece. -- Achelois |
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Re: Pure Love
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by daggers on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 02:12:02 PM AEST
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| beautiful! it conjure's visual like a motion picture |
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Re: Pure Love
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 05:11:28 PM AEST
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beautiful..
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Pure Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 01:19:35 AM AEST
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| i'm speechless i just wish i had an ounce of your ability keep up the excellent work |
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Re: Pure Love
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by bleedinheart on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 06:17:54 AM AEST
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| beautiful imagery |
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Re: Pure Love
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 09:59:36 PM AEST
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another great piece by a gifted poet
one does find
creating the imagery for
one's mind
you wrote,
"gazing into mirrored green
these eyes forget public's care"
with these lines have you foretold
the reality of love, how it is so bold
when "pure emotion" enraptures those truely in love
nothing in this world will ever rise above.
Keeping writing duff, because we really love your stuff!
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Re: Pure Love
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by petulinka on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 11:21:04 AM AEST
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| pure as the love you expressed!!..nice rthym as well!! |
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Re: Pure Love
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 06:28:39 AM AEST
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"live to love or hide to hate" - love this line because so many people really do hide instead of loving.
"this love shatters shields exposing the inside" - something that real love should always do.
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Re: Pure Love
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:23:38 PM AEST
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| Wow really liked this write always use that gift you have from God just keep writing. |
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