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My Opinion
Contributed by
paridice
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Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 10:13:17 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Threw my eyes i see things that are being done around me .
I hear things that are being said.
Do i really see ?
Do i really heare ?
Life is so many things to so many people.
No one person can tell another about life.
What is life ?
The things we do, the things we say are stepping stones
of how your life is developing.
Life is a cycle.It can end at any moment.
God gives you life and he can take it away.
We start this life knowing but not knowing.
Our Teachers, our Pears, our Friends, our Family, our World.
It teaches us.
What does this world and all these people teach us?
They teach us:
LOVE,
CAREING,
HATE,
PAIN,
DECEPTION,
and more............
To a certain degree we can control partially these things
we chose to build our life on.
We choose to HATE someone or something.
We choose to LOVE someone or something.
We choose to be DECEPTIVE against another.
We choose to CARE for someone or something.
We choose to let someone or something cause us pain.
We choose to inflict pain upon someone else.
We choose these things at some point in our lives because we are weak.
We cant control our lives alone.
We need help.
At some point in our life no matter wather you are rich or poor we can
admit for just a moment that we are lost and we need guidence.
From who????
Everyone has there own beliefs.
Mine is GOD.
Copyright ©
paridice
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2010-04-19 22:13:17]
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Re: My Opinion
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by spud on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 05:47:53 AM AEST
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Hi,
Nicely crafted.
We all have the will and the power to choose,
and we can hide or we can do.
Tommy
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