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Tears
Contributed by
Jessi95
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Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 07:14:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My tears feel empty
But I know its not true
Because my tears are filled
With my love for you
I scream for you
But you dont seem to hear
I scream for you
Because my life is full of fear
I bow my head
As the tears run down my face
I know I shouldnt want you
But I really need your embrace
Your warm arms
I just cant get them out of my mind
I know that I should
But your kindness made me blind
I still see you
When I close my eyes
But when they open up
All I see are your lies
You said you loved me
What was I supposed to do?
When you turned your back
Even thought I screamed for you
Now you see me sitting here
With tears falling to the floor
Because I wasnt able
To fight my own war
Copyright ©
Jessi95
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2010-04-21 19:14:24]
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 07:38:17 PM AEST
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| Really beautiful, but heartbreaking poem. I understand the feelings expressed in this poem very well. Keep writing, you have a wonderful way of pulling the reader into the story being told. |
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Re: Tears
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by Breezy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:31:38 AM AEST
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This is tremendously sad. Love is such a peculiar
emotion. It has the power to make us stronger than
we've ever felt, but also weaker than we could ever
imagine. Your heart and soul was poured into this.
Well done. -- Achelois
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