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Georgie
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 08:43:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lights go down
You disappear
Georgie comes to hold my hand
To protect me from his brothers
Sad how a figment of sickness
Can replace you
Where have you been?
Come the words at dawn
To know intimately in the night
Loneliness like a twin Georgie
And the fear his brothers bring
White thundering terror in the night
Not safe in my own bed
I cry for your abandon
All of you, my blood and soul related
Upon whom I once depended
Before I made Georgie
Because all of you fell asleep
When Jesus, I told you not to
It is best anyway for you to endure
With eyes wide closed
You wouldn't want to see
My childhood imaginary friend
Carry him into adulthood
Because he is my only true friend
The only one who never sleeps
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2010-04-21 20:43:31]
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Re: Georgie
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 10:13:35 PM AEST
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I hear you loud and clear.
The only perfection is in our imagination.
I give you 100 points for such a good work of art.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Georgie
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by aliopterix on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 01:58:36 AM AEST
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| This is just such a beautiful piece of writing my friend. Incredibly worded and evocative. Thank you, Aliopterix |
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Re: Georgie
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by Breezy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:23:27 AM AEST
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Fear can be a gripping emotion, almost like a vice.
Not just holding us, but squeezing our souls to the
point of suffocation. This was very thought provoking.
You write with eloquence.
Well done. -- Achelois |
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Re: Georgie
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 12th October 2019 @ 11:31:30 PM AEST
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It ward gran bow
Eyes wide shut
I am the dancing clown
Don/'/t you wanna see where the rainbow ends
Do they float
OH YES
THEY ALL
FLLLOAT DOWN HERE
TOP HATS AN ALL
FLOAT NEVER FALL
CAN YOU WITH EYES WIDE SHUT RECALL
YOUR IMAGINARY FRIEND
CHILDHOODS END |
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Re: Georgie
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 12th October 2019 @ 11:32:50 PM AEST
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It wards
Fran bow
Rainbow |
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