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Its one of a kind
Contributed by
keela12
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Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 12:33:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It felt like we already knew each other before we met
It was strange but we liked it
All my life I would dream about falling in love and finally
I found it .some may think love I just a feeling and just
Say( I love u )and thats it but its not love is much more than a feeling ,
Love is not how u listen but how u understand
It s not how u look but wats inside
Its not forget but how u forgive not how u let go but how u hold on
Not wat u have but wat u give love is not wat u see but how u react to wat u see
Love is more than a feeling
It felt like a fairytale but theyre not real
This is real life and love is not prefect all love has problems and sometimes we need time apart from each other but the love should never change and it never will
So if u dont no finding love is very hard so never take it for granted
embrace it for u never no when it could slip away
Dont ever take love for granted
All the lovers say strong and faithfull to ur lover
Be fairand try to understand them
Never forget that love is a gift from god
Live life and love each other to the end
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Re: Its one of a kind
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by daggers on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 03:31:09 PM AEST
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You have feeling and emotion,
my advice is this, make us picture and feel what you are feeling , rather than just explaining how you feel. also remember less is more. you can make someone think for hours, see hundreds of images and feel amazing feelings in just 3 lines!
Welcome to yourpoetry! :)
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