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mouse and toad
Contributed by
rambo56
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Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 03:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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there was a little mouse and his friend the toad
and upon his back the little mouse he rode
they were best of friends and together everyday
the little mouse and toad they just loved to play
oneday as they were playing they heard a funny sound
so the mouse and toad took a look around
there in the grass they saw a little shrew
somehow he got lost and didnt know what to do
the mouse he said dont worry i know where you are
i will take you home again it isnt very far
follow me and toad he said we will take you back.
so off they went together down the grassy track
then they found shrews home a little down the road
the shrew he was happy and thanked the mouse and toad
the mouse he said goodbye then off on toad he rode
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Re: mouse and toad
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by Nevilleconnie on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 03:33:47 PM AEST
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| Wow, that's a lovely poem for a child to read. Helping others is a theme all children need to learn about. And this poem tells how to do it in a very cute way. Really good job. |
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Re: mouse and toad
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by windowguy on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:53:10 PM AEST
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| Pleasant little tale. Kindness always wins hearts. Nice one. |
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Re: mouse and toad
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by quadira on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 01:47:40 PM AEST
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| This would make a great childs book with illustrations. Flows really nicely. |
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Re: mouse and toad
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by Applethoughtrotten on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 11:55:15 AM AEST
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| Loved it....Apple |
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