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Breaking Free
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
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Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 03:38:14 PM in AEST
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Sickness, pure sickness. Its what I now feel. Why did I listen? Oh why did I deal.?
Your lies wouldnt cease. Whyd it take me so long? Whyd I ever believe, That I did something wrong?
A liars a liar. And thats what you are. You sit and conspire, On how to break hearts.
Your plan didnt work though. My heart didnt break. So why dont you go, Lick your wounds far away.
Seek out new prey. Maybe use some new bait. For me its to late. Ive already escaped.
Ill take what I have now, A heart still intact. Ill break through the clouds, You have made in the past.
How foolish I was, To believe you a friend. Im glad that where done. Yeah, Im glad its the end.
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Nevilleconnie
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Re: Breaking Free
(User Rating: 1 ) by LyssaM on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 03:46:20 PM AEST (User
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I was literally in awe while reading this poem. It is excellent. It is easy to relate to and has amazing metaphors. |
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Re: Breaking Free
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jessi95 on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 08:48:08 PM AEST (User
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Very nice |
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