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The bones
Contributed by
urizen
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Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 06:13:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sun sends a shadow
flying across this bitter and broken landscape,
The hours flow like ancient rivers,
And soon one by one
each bone is exposed of it's rotting flesh.
It died here,
Slowly, Dehydrated,
Robbed of it's soul
by the nature of the world
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Re: The bones
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 10:57:41 PM AEST
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| Strong imagery in this writing,such that you can feel the parched land that leads to the rotting of the carcass and therefore opens up the paralelled picture of the rotting of the soul well written |
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