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Big Sister
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 11:00:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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I wish you were here, Big Sister
To just hold my hand
And look away while I cry
Because you know I hate it
When you can see my weakness
But I want you to see it,
My underbelly shining blue
Just like my tears,
For another heartbreak, Big Sister,
I shouldve listened to you
You never judge, though,
You know I walk
To get where Im going
Ill never take a ride
Even from you
You must hate me
When I come crawling back
To your side
When I dont keep in touch
Except when I really need it
But youre my Big Sister
And I was there for you,
When we grew up together
And things stopped making sense
You knew before I did
Everything has a cost
Yet somehow your beautiful
Adoring eyes show compassion
An always, ever-constant marquee saying
Ill be here for you
Because Im your Big Sister
And I know
I know
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2010-04-24 23:00:43]
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Re: Big Sister
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by aliopterix on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 11:16:17 PM AEST
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| I love the composition, the wording and the sentiment.Fine job my friend. Aliopterix. |
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Re: Big Sister
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 10:20:22 AM AEST
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This screams of unconditional love and support. And
there is comfort in the lines that cradle a heart just where
and when it is needed most. Truly a lovely dedication.
Beautifully written. -- Achelois
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Re: Big Sister
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by duff on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 12:44:11 PM AEST
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A write full of sincerity and soul. There is nothing more warming than the feelings we have for family and the bond shared is amazingly strong in heart. A touching write.
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