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I Love You
Contributed by
ShadowMan
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Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 06:53:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My heart skips a beat, as my mind goes a flutter
My stomach coils, as my spine melts like butter
The thoughts I think, The things I say
Can not express the things
I want to convey.
How can I prove, what can I do?
How can I show how much I love you?
A lady so sweet with a body so fair
Makes me feel like I'm walking on air.
You make me happy, you make me smile,
My confidence and spirit you lift for awhile
For there is no one that comes close, nor compares
Than you my dear whose bond we forever share
Copyright ©
ShadowMan
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2010-04-26 06:53:14]
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Re: I Love You
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by Nevilleconnie on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 08:22:59 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. It expresses the beauty of love wonderfully. |
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Re: I Love You
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by Breezy on
Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 04:16:15 AM AEST
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A pure and beautiful declaration of devotion. Love
the couplet at the end. This is so soft and delicate.
Great job. -- Achelois
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