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Yanitza
Contributed by
mimichan2
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Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 05:08:20 PM in AEST
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Young and Naive
A love that runs deep
Never turning my back on a friend in need
Intelligent as can be
The skys my limit
Zany as can be
Adoring the friends that enjoy the real me
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mimichan2
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Re: Yanitza
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by JakerBaker88 on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 05:48:15 PM AEST
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| For a quick write this was well conceived and executed. Good job! I especially enjoyed the sentiment of this poem as well as its playfulness. =) Take care. |
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Re: Yanitza
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by northernlights on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 11:05:09 PM AEST
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| Refreshingly full of youth and hope at the same time declaring insight......adoring the friends that enjoy the real me well written |
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Re: Yanitza
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 12:52:57 AM AEST
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Definitely people who cannot accept you as you are certainly are not really friends. You choose wisely and this is a nice expression of that wisdom. Nicely done.
Tim
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