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Dull Ache
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 08:24:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tears refuse to come,
So the weight of my sadness builds
Becoming unbearable-----
Snapping my heart in two.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-04-26 20:24:48]
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Re: Dull Ache
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 12:58:21 AM AEST
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You conveyed your feelings well.
I know this feeling well but if you think about it...in time, was it truly a friendship if the person could terminate it so easily?
I fully understand how you would feel like this but I hope as time passes you'll see if they were truly a friend worth having.
Real friends stick by you, flaws and all.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Dull Ache
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by Breezy on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 06:12:29 AM AEST
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I agree with Tim. Friends worth having, won't let you
down. Or ever make you wonder if they care. In four
short lines, you've captured the sorrow of loss so very
well. But the heart is an amazingly resilient organ. ;)
Sorry you're hurting. Thinking happy thoughts for you.
-- Achelois
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