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Chocolate!
Contributed by
savannah1085
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Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 10:43:18 AM in AEST
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Chocolate, Chocolate, dark and creamy,
You are very, very dreamy.
Tempting me all through the day,
Tempting me to Pay, Pay, PAY!
Nestle, Hersheys, I don't care!
I wish you would come in pairs!
Chocolate, Chocolate, you are sweet!
Chocolate, Chocolate, keep your beat!
Chocolate, Chocolate, dark and creamy,
You are very, very dreamy.
Tempting me all through the night,
Tempting me to take a bite!
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Re: Chocolate!
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by Nevilleconnie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 11:03:14 AM AEST
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| A very cute poem. Enjoyed reading it. Brought a smile to my face. And chocolate is indeed very tempting. |
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Re: Chocolate!
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 08:21:26 PM AEST
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Yum! I think I'll go eat some chocolate now!
Great poem!
Heidi |
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Re: Chocolate!
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by aliopterix on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 10:17:50 AM AEST
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| I love simplicity in poetry because it conveys so much. I like your writing it is so fresh. Aliopterix ( Al) |
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Re: Chocolate!
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by mimichan2 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 11:25:51 AM AEST
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| i luv it. it reminds me of me when i really want some chocolate!! keep up the good work |
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Re: Chocolate!
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by FlintHunter on
Sunday, 11th September 2011 @ 05:38:43 AM AEST
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Chocolate!
Contributed by savannah1085 on Tuesday, April 27 2010 @ 10:43:18 AEST
Topic: 0oops No Topic - General Poetry!
An absolutely adorable poem. How creative of you to write on a theme SO many people just talk about -- but never could so eloquently express: their DEEP LOVE OF CHOCOLATE! This is a poem for the People if I ever heard one! Great! Great!
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Re: Chocolate!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th October 2012 @ 11:55:45 PM AEST
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Yeah, Chocolate. That's the stuff. Enjoyed this a lot.
Tim
(who actually thought he had commented on it when it was originally posted but alas, don't see it) Hmmmmm?  |
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