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My Smile
Contributed by
arden
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Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 07:06:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Can I count the days in black and white
Or even a night without color
Maybe today she might---
.Or tomorrow
Translucent seconds tick by
Fading.. Fading into a dream
That hint of happiness?
I trick myself into thinking its there
Foolish to live in a fantasy
Yes but..
Smile, and I will pretend its for me
.again
Copyright ©
arden
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2010-04-27 19:06:56]
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Re: My Smile
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 05:43:06 AM AEST
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| Now that is just simply beautiful,esp that last line full of feeling, sensitivity runs throughout in a wonderful soft thoughtful way well written |
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Re: My Smile
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 01:40:54 PM AEST
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beautiful, feels sad too,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My Smile
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 10:47:08 AM AEST
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Ah, when we dream of that one from afar. I'll bet there is that special smile out there somewhere for you.
This poem had a completely natural feel to it and did not seem forced at all. A mark of excellence.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: My Smile
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 02:15:09 PM AEST
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| Lovely!!! |
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