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The Cleansing Rain
Contributed by
darkwolf
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Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 07:32:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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With the rain
comes the absence of pain
the shower that falls
washes it all away
to forget those troubles
to leave them in the ground
as the rain falls
they are all washed into the ground
leave nothing that troubles you heart or mind
to be aloud to be left behind
let the rain wash it all away
all is forgotten
all is forgiven
all that troubles is gone
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darkwolf
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2010-04-28 07:32:47]
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Re: The Cleansing Rain
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by tjmontanagirl on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 07:50:07 AM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL WRITE!!!!!!!!!
i very much enjoyed reading this piece :)
keep writing.
~Taylor |
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Re: The Cleansing Rain
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 11:17:52 PM AEST
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| Beautiful concept in its simplicity and effectual in the imagery you have created,you feel cleansed of all worries with this well written |
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