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I Am Surrender
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 07:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am surrender
From the ripped, torn pieces
Of identity in the fire
That I started
To the dogs bow
Before you, Master
In a rumbling shiver,
Takeover invited
Conquer me
Mistaken for eyes
With the same message
When I was just a girl
And didnt want power
I didnt know the word
From cycles of deprivation
A boom and bust,
Sahara and mirage,
I learned to keep close
What I didnt want taken
But you took me
Stole me when I wasnt looking
Taunted me over the edge
To chase you into a chasm
A freefall
Never felt so free
As when your arms entrapped me
Never let go so hard
As when my hand gripped yours
Its not taking
If it was always meant for you
Because for you
I am surrender
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2010-04-28 19:49:25]
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Re: I Am Surrender
(User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 02:42:48 AM AEST
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wow! What a proclamation!! This is just excellent
writing. A beautiful and provocative piece that falls
so easily into a rhythm. A very enjoyable read. There
is a destiny of emotion here. And it is exceptionally
well articulated. Perfection.
Gorgeous write!! -- Achelois
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