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if i could
Contributed by
rambo56
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Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 03:36:36 PM in AEST
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if i could change the world from what it is today
i would take away the bad and throw it all away
i would stop the wars and have a world so bright
no one in the world would ever have to fight
no more gobal warming and a planet acting strange
i would put it right and the world would never change
no more starving children dying everday
i put it right and this would go away
if i could do all this it would be a better place
and the world outside i could really face
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Re: if i could
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by mimichan2 on
Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 05:06:25 PM AEST
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| I know exactly what you mean if i could i would do the same thing. |
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Re: if i could
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by Nevilleconnie on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 05:39:39 AM AEST
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| Wonderful ideas. A great inspirational poem to read. Great job. |
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